While I'm not a comic page expert (hell I'm terrible at making comics myself). This is pretty damn good. The only thing I would've done is to add more of the square and rectangle comic slots (the windows) because while the windows you did are nice and are eye catching to someone reading a comic is gets repetitive overtime if that's all you do you know? That's just my opinon though
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